It is inevitable for every person on the planet to go through various phases of life. Each and every stage of life has its own advantages and drawbacks. However, while comparing younger people to the older ones, I personally feel that the younger generation has lot many advantages and options to enjoy the life than the older people. Thus, I agree with the notion that older people enjoy comparatively less than the younger lads.
To begin with, for the younger people, the age, and the body metabolism provides an added advantage. They can play or run or jog for hours of time. This would not be possible for the older ones as their body and mindset might not support this in most of the cases. For instance, while I was a kid, around 6 years, I used to play hide and seek - a game where one must run and hide themselves - with my grandfather. While I could play the game without any break or taking a respite, my grandfather could not play it for more than 2 hours, although he enjoyed the game. Thus, age plays an important part to the excitement and joy of the younger kids.
Moreover, the younger people receive greater support from a wide range of people, which is not possible for older ones. For instance, when I was given a task to solve a tough mathematical problem during my high school, I was assisted by a wide range of people - my parents, relatives, and neighbors - to solve it. On the other hand, while my uncle - who was in his mid 30's - was suffering from financial crisis only a few of his friends offered help. Thus, if we are facing any complex problems in life, it is more likely to get better support while we are young compared to the phase of life when we are older. Thus getting rid of issues or problems in lives faster by taking help could benefit the younger lads to enjoy more.
What's more, the younger generation has a lot of time at their disposal to explore new things. This is due to the fact that they have lesser responsibilities when compared to the older ones. For instance, my younger cousin, who is 11 years old, makes time to enjoy her hobby - dancing. She spends almost 2 hours every day to dance and enjoy her favorite pass time. Her mother, my aunt, who is also interested in dancing could not spend the time to savor and enjoy her hobby. This is because, most of the time she is occupied with responsibilities - cooking, washing and taking care of the family. Thus, the younger generation has an advantage of working on their interests - which helps them to be happy - most often when compared to older people as they have lesser tasks to complete on daily basis.
In conclusion, there are a plethora of instances when younger people enjoy their lives in a better way than the older people could do. It could be in terms of receiving help, playing for a long time, support from own people and community, having fewer responsibilities and much more. But, this phase ends pretty quickly as we need to take up the responsibilities in our life. However, one could admit after becoming old, perhaps most of the times, that their younger generation is enjoying much more than themselves and they themselves had a joyful past sharing the experiences of their childhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...efit the younger lads to enjoy more. Whats more, the younger generation has a lot ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2636.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 575.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58434782609 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89685180668 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50059237631 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474782608696 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 820.8 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8284212718 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.384615385 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1153846154 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246489701824 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710474566871 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858357833219 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156386550054 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089173817734 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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