Tobacco mainly in form of cigarettes is one of the most-widely used drugs in the world. Over a billion of adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long term health costs are high- for smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity.
Do governments have a legitimate role to legislate, to protect from the harmful effects of their own decisions to smoke, or are such decisions up to the individual?
Despite of all the harmful effect of tobacco, it is legal in almost all the countries of the world. Although almost millions of people are chain smokers yet it is not being banned. The cigarette has an adverse impact on the health of the people.
It causes various deadly diseases like cancer, heart diseases, asthma, lung infection, etc.
The teenagers under peer pressure start drinking cigarette. At that time they are not sensible enough to understand that it will harm their body in the long run. With the passage of time, they start becoming addicted to it and they are not able to leave it even if they want to. Many people start drinking cigarette just to show off and later they regret. Many people take it just for fun and entertainment and they forget that they themselves are damaging their body.
Governments should take proper measures to stop people becoming addicted to it. This can only be done by the government. They should impose a heavy tax on these drugs so that fewer people could afford it. The people under 21 should not be allowed to take these deadly things. Moreover, people in rural areas should be made well aware of the harmful effects of these drugs by organizing various programs. Students should also be taught and frequently checked so that they do not dissuade from their path as it will greatly affect their career. After few years it should be banned.
People today are not ready to understand that their life has a great value for their family and friends. By the time they understand it becomes too late. So, it is the duty of the government to take strict measures.People should also understand that life is very precious and once gone can never be gained back.So, they should value it and take care of themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 544, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...as it will greatly affect their career. After few years it should be banned. Peopl...
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Line 8, column 216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
... the government to take strict measures.People should also understand that life is ver...
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Line 8, column 312, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... and once gone can never be gained back.So, they should value it and take care of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 20.9802955665 210% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 308.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73376623377 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35493259759 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538961038961 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2610412863 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7368421053 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2105263158 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.47368421053 7.25397266985 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0625756641765 0.242375264174 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0231084644487 0.0925447433944 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326575453381 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0426326170903 0.151781067708 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491115214576 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 12.6369458128 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.1260098522 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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