What do you want most in a friend – someone who is intelligent, or someone who has a sense of humor, o someone who is reliable? Which one on these characteristic is more important to you? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.
Friends are people who we share our thoughts, secrets, and life with. Therefore it is important for people to depend on their friends. Personally, I think that the most significant quality of a friend is reliability. There are a few reasons why I hold this opinion.
First of all, a friend who we can count on helps resolve our problems. A great friend takes our troubles as his owns, and hence, will be there to help us when we need it. Conversely, if a person who we consider a friend promises us a support and then does not keep the promise, he let us down. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was moving to the United States, I did not have an opportunity to take my cat with me. I was really worried about the animal. However, a friend of mine said that she will take care of the creature until the moment when I will be able to move the cat to the U.S. In fact, she kept her word and provided him with a home, food, and love. In this way, my reliable friend helped me to overcome problematic life situation.
Secondly, when we can depend on a friend, we feel not lonely because we are certain that there is a person who will support us in any circumstances. This makes us feel less stressful and more protected. Indeed, if a friend helps us when we need it, we can accomplish more than we can do when we are alone. For instance, in the situation with my cat, which I mentioned above, I new that my animal was in good hands and it let me concentrate on other things, which I had to get done before the relocation to another country, such as packing all my stuff and buying flight tickets. It decreased the stressfulness of the event and made me feel supported and psychologically well. That is why it is crucial to have a reliable friend.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the best friend is the one who I can count on at any moment of my life. This is because it helps me overcome life complications and feel emotionally great.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...e our thoughts, secrets, and life with. Therefore it is important for people to depend on...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: I_NEW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'knew' (past of "to know")?
Suggestion: knew
...with my cat, which I mentioned above, I new that my animal was in good hands and it...
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Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mplications and feel emotionally great.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31621621622 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61124863432 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516216216216 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5648045079 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.85 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121593994921 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438691019762 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360354580097 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897795056466 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179176876744 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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