TPO 42
Since the dawn of humanity, human beings have been involved in a great struggle to find an appropriate solution for working in a day. As far as working is concerned, working hours and responsibilities each job brings with itself have been an inseparable element of human society. Today, as it commonly sensed, types of jobs undergo some changes and they are more specific than in past. There is a controversy amongst different people whether have different tasks to do during workday is a proper opt or it would be better to do same tasks every day.
It is worth starting at this point that the most noticeable virtue of having same task to do every day is that it may help you to be more sophisticated in your work which can provide better opportunity for promotion. To be more elaborate, someone who excel in his or her task can get promotion which directly resulted in his or her salary. Conversely, if one does some different tasks every day cannot be as good as when the same person just focuses on a single task; consequently, it will reduce the chance of promotion and earning more money.
The first and foremost advantages of doing different tasks, On the contrary, is that it can motive worker since, one can learn more and more and increase his or her in knowledge in different fields. As a clear illustration, humanity show natural inclination toward learning everything, and this inclination stimulate people to learn different kind of things. Particularly, workers on the ground of mentioned tendency wants to learn different tasks and by take this into consideration, their efficiency will dramatically improve.
Furthermore, another merit of aforementioned idea is that workers can classified their responsibilities so that they might finished them in order of their importance. To exemplify, when someone has different tasks to do after arranging them, he or she can do the most important one when he or she is fresh and do easy one when is tired. Statistics shows the fact that workers who have different types of task are significantly better in their work so much so that it is better to have 2 workers doing different tasks rather than 4 workers doing the same every day.
To put the issue into prospective, with all this taken into account, I would wholeheartedly assert that have different types of tasks is a wise choice since, from my point of view the pros of this idea far outweigh its cons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 378, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...changes and they are more specific than in past. There is a controversy amongst differe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, first, furthermore, if, may, so, kind of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85036963631 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507211538462 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.7456786297 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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