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Speakings by user Maryabb
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- TPO 01 - Question 5 90
- Which carrer you want to choose?? Why ? 63
- Talk about a special opportunity that was given to you Explain why the opportunity was important 75
- Describe a social or politics celebration event in your culture. Specificexamples and details are necessary in your statement. 83
- If you could have any job or career you wanted, which would you choose and why? Give specific details to explain your response 83
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ok! you said in one of the
ok! you said in one of the answers whenever I explain any of my reasons , I should put an exclusion in the end and that is why I used if ..what alternatives should I use ?? like in this speech I needed to use it
Since the first sentence is
Since the first sentence is 'if' clause, we don't need to make any if conditions again, which will duplicate the content.
what you do:
1. remove that if clause
2. make one more sentence
The conclusion == advantages of the reason
for example, in the first reason, we may say : ... my friend will get whatever books she wants for sure (advantage 1); and the books will enrich her knowledge about my country's customs, cultures, histories ...(advantage 2)
25 in 30
two issues:
1. there are duplicated contents, like: 'if my friends....', 'so taking my friends there...'
better not to make 'if' clauses in speaking.
2. you only talk in 43 seconds. need to talk more.