Issue: The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
I broadly agree with given issue statement. The given issue statement claims that the best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things. It is very essential to discuss all pros and cons of the given issue statement. Let us discuss all pros and cons of the given issue statement.
People’s are looking around in the nature and observes newness in the old things. In the nature everything is in the original and simple form but people could make and feel them so difficult because of their point of view to observe that things. People are always observing things around them and find whatever different in that thing. Consider an example bird, person observe bird flying in the sky and then think why he was not able to fly in the sky. Many prominent thinkers think on it until uplifting force was discovered. Then he had discovered aircraft which was heavier than air. Now human are using them to go on different planets in the space. With the help of new insects like robot he had discovered many more planets in the world.
Another best example in contemporary life is about molecular biology. In beginning of 20th century life science was theoretical but in the beginning 21th century all life science became experimental. At the end of 20th and beginning of 21th century some scientist had discovered Escheria coli as a genetic code. This genetic code helps human to open new secrets about how they evolve and from what. E coli had helps human to discover many secrets in their life. In molecular biology with the help clone method human had developed complete sheep from some cells of the original sheep.
As we know that everyone have its own point of view. Every artist can have their own different ideas and opinion about particular thing they observe. If many artists see landscape and tell them to design what they think about it, then everyone produce design of it in his own way and every of these artists has produces masterpiece of that landscape with the help of that landscape and their own ideas.
Therefore,I totally agree with the given issue statement that the best idea arises from passionate interest and commonplace things that people observe in their everyday life.
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Sentence: Consider an example bird, person observe bird flying in the sky and then think why he was not able to fly in the sky.
Description: The fragment person observe bird is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace observe with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: If many artists see landscape and tell them to design what they think about it, then everyone produce design of it in his own way and every of these artists has produces masterpiece of that landscape with the help of that landscape and their own ideas.
Description: The fragment everyone produce design is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace produce with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to produces and masterpiece
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 381 350
No. of Characters: 1797 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.418 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.717 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.342 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 112 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.318 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.385 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.273 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.296 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.547 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.231 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5