THE amount of sport shown on television every week has increased significantly and this is having an impact on live sport events.
Do you think the benefits of having more televised sport are greater than the disadvantages?
The amount of televised sport hugely increase nowadays. This has a greater influence on live sports event. personally, I believe the advantages of broadcasting sports on television overweight its drawbacks.
First of all, the most obvious benefit of televised sport is that larger sports clubs benefit financially from TV revenue and the top players can command very large salaries, Manchester city club is a good example. Furthermore, it can enhance the connections between family members especially if they support the club. Also, its way to save money that can be wasted in buying high priced tickets.
however, there are certain disadvantages to having so much sport on television. Many smaller clubs have suffered financial losses recently, as they can not compete with the larger ones. Moreover, there has been a general decline in ticket sales, especially among the smaller clubs.
To sum up, while televised sport has created many opportunities for individuals and clubs, it has been responsible for changing the nature of live sports event for ever
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The amount of televised sport hugely increase nowadays.
The amount of televised sport hugely increases nowadays.
flaws:
No. of Words: 168 350 //Minimum 250 words wanted.
you can put more content for the examples. We are expecting:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 168 350
No. of Characters: 867 1500
No. of Different Words: 116 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.6 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.161 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.709 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 67 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.165 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.385 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.657 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.054 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...s. This has a greater influence on live sports event. personally, I believe the advant...
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Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Personally
...greater influence on live sports event. personally, I believe the advantages of broadcasti...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ted in buying high priced tickets. however, there are certain disadvantages to hav...
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Line 10, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...duals and clubs, it has been responsible for changing the nature of live sports e...
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Line 10, column 149, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...nsible for changing the nature of live sports event for ever
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3869047619 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78586054765 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.702380952381 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0628754862 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327706774081 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137984177611 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114507639827 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201517108668 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110262326952 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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