Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Other, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Most recently, the crime is getting increase in many countries. Either in rich countries or poor countries, rural area or urban area, the crime still on and on. There is no way to make crime disappeared, but punishment for each mistake can make people think twice before they commit the crime. Some people believe think that before deciding a punishment for a crime, the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing the crime should be considered as well. However, in my own perspective, the punishment should be fixed for each type of crime.
Sometimes we can see that penalty for a crime also depends on the motivation and the circumstances of individual crime. It is not fair because people face different punishment for the same action. For example, when important people such as official, authorities, actors or actress were put in a jail because of their mistake, they will get a better facility than ordinary person.
Thus, in my opinion, it is better to fix a punishment to make it fair for everyone. By a fixed punishment, people will face the same penalty when they commit the same crime either important people or just ordinary people. A fixed punishment is also important in keeping a consistency in law. It will reduced the unfairness in the court as well.
In conclusion, a punishment for each type of criminal must be fixed. Even they have a different circumstances and motivation, they should be treated in the same way of penalty.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2013-09-09 | pateltejas | 80 | view |
| 2013-05-19 | nwahyuni | 60 | view |
| 2012-10-19 | maryam2900 | 74 | view |
- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education Or is it the responsibility of the government of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves 90
- "Of the two leading real estate firms in our town—Adams Realty and Fitch Realty—Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as 78
- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorernations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it theresponsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after theircitizens themselves? 72
- Directors of large companies often receive much bigger salary increases than ordinary workers Employers organizations say that in global market this is necessary to attract the best management talent What are your views 76
- Some people think that the universities should provide graduates with skills and knowledge needen in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should to be give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the cours 70
Sentence: It will reduced the unfairness in the court as well.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to will and reduced
flaws:
No. of Words: 251 350
No. of Characters: 1190 1500
No. of Different Words: 116 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 251 350
No. of Characters: 1190 1500
No. of Different Words: 116 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.98 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.741 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.733 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 80 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 59 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.929 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.419 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.786 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.377 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.572 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.111 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5