Essay topics: You are an employee in an office, working on one big project together with your colleagues. Write a letter to your manager to inform him/her that some of the employees make mistakes that affect your work. In your letter say
- What mistakes have you encountered so far?
- Explain that others employees complained about the same mistakes.
- Suggest a solution to solve this problem
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to inform you that one of my colleagues has a negative influence on my work and the overall development of the project.
Maria Crank who is responsible for statistics and calculations in the project is always out of schedule, when her part is needed it is always unfinished or done poorly. Moreover, her calculations are often erroneous and I simply cannot be trusted; so, I must check them each time.
Furthermore, other co-workers who participate to the project have similar complaints about Maria as well. In fact, Mark had to spend both weekends working in the office because of her mistake with statistics. Furthermore, she frequently takes several sick days in a row and in order to stay in the schedule we have to share her part among us. That really slows us down.
I have a reason to think that she may be dangerous for the success of the project and replacing her with Tim Cook from the sales department will solve the problem. Tim has already worked in several big projects and has proven himself as reliable and smart employee. If Tim cannot participate to our team, her part may be given to outsourcers. There is a well-known internet firm that provides businesses with such services. If you are interested, I may conduct a small research about conditions on which the firm is working.
Sincerely yours,
Eugene Dubinchuk.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9 //the formula works
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 236 250
No. of Characters: 1100 1200
No. of Different Words: 145 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.919 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.661 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.691 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 72 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.733 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.291 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.533 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.284 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.655 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.158 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 462, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'small research'.
Suggestion: small research
...s. If you are interested, I may conduct a small research about conditions on which the firm is w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, so, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87288135593 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.785184673 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7307515066 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4615384615 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128832531097 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409210437956 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416485875145 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814870702435 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362600158012 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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