13.09.2017 Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Being able to talk on two languages has been becoming a necessity in a contemporary world. Many educators aver that starting learning a new tongue at the beginning of school education is, perhaps, the best way to do it. Below merits and drawbacks of this prospect will discussed in details and author’s opinion will be stated.
On the one hand, probably the strongest argument in support of the proposed idea is that there are formative years from an early childhood till adolescence when kids’ brains and minds are being formed. If offspring starts learning the second language at primary school, the process of studying will be more smooth and painless, moreover, it is likely that the pupils will be equally fluent in both tongues. Another advantage that ought to be mentioned is that elementary school curriculum consists of relatively a few subjects; thus, more time, may be devoted to acquiring a new language without overloading the pupils with studying. In other words, the primary school students have favorable circumstances for starting to learn a novel tongue.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages. Many parents worry that their beloved offspring will have no childhood if the proposal is implemented. In fact, learning of a new tongue could require a lot of time and thus, children might be forced to spend their early years reading textbooks and looking in a computer screen. Moreover, a human being is a social animal that learns how to interact with others during formative years by playing, chatting and having fun with others. If there is no time left on those activities because of studying, a kid might not develop the skills that are so essential for a successful living in society.
In my opinion, advantages of beginning to study a foreign tongue at primary school clearly outweigh disadvantages that may be avoided if the policy is fulfilled wisely.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
It is out of topic. The topic is not:
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school.
but:
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
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The right structure:
introduction.
advantages of 'begin learning a foreign language at primary school'.
advantages of 'begin learning a foreign language at secondary school'.
conclusion.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 314 350
No. of Characters: 1538 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.21 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.898 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.661 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.154 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.347 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.692 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.314 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.538 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.022 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Ok.
Ok.
I need your help.
The right structure:
introduction.
advantages of 'begin learning a foreign language at primary school'.
advantages of 'begin learning a foreign language at secondary school'.
conclusion.
where I should discuss disadvantages? (Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?)
Eugene.
here the advantages of
here 'the advantages in secondary school' is like 'the disadvantages in primary school'.
I am sorry but I do not get
I am sorry but I do not get it. May you explain it in more details?
Thank you.
the advantages of learning
the advantages of learning the second language in secondary school like:
1. Children in secondary school are mature enough to deal with the burden of learning a foreign language, while it may be a big pressure for little kids.
2. Children will get more time to play/communicate in primary school if they learn the new language in secondary school . //some content in the third paragraph
3. Children may have conflict with mother languages in pronunciation, grammar in an early age, while this is not an issue for those in the secondary school.
4. more...
Oh my goodness))) I will
Oh my goodness))) I will understand it eventually.
Thank you for your Help!
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'discuss'
Suggestion: discuss
...its and drawbacks of this prospect will discussed in details and author's opinion wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, moreover, second, so, thus, in fact, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07324840764 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76968463691 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585987261146 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9176837196 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.538461538 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210635763678 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745857161678 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733638466713 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147010677137 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712391435073 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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