Learning the native language at the elementary stage of schooling rather than secondary has been considered as a priority by some professionals. I agree with the aforementioned fact. Although learning exotic language shall be grabbed promptly by children, it shall reduce the extra burden of the later stage from them. Below essay will brief the advantages with relevant examples.
To embark upon, invariably concentration among the children at young stage assist them to grasp the non- native language easily and get the benefit at secondary as well as the later stage of life. Secondly, they become capable to compete for jobs across the globe and settle themselves at the reputed position in a company. For instance, Foreign language conversation has been frequently seen among the parents to demonstrate their children and teach them easily from the very young age. In addition, English has been chosen as a compulsory subject in India at the primary stage of schooling by the government.
Similarly, it has been very supportive in reducing the burden on the children at secondary stage, since students have been facing the burden of various other subjects such as Science, Maths, History etc. Moreover, shyness among the children at secondary stage has been relaxed which has been usually found at this stage. Allow me to elaborate on the above fact by giving the example of myself. Owing to French as the non-native language for me, there has always a feeling of shyness as well as low confidence has been observed during my conversation with others in this language.
In my opinion, considering the inevitable profits of acquisition of foreign language, it shall be regularized by the government at all the primary level of schooling.
To conclude, considering the aforementioned advantages of adopting the foreign language at initial stage of schooling not only boost-up the confidence level of children as well as give the bright future them and the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has usually been
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Suggestion:
...rimary level of schooling. To conclude, considering the aforementioned advantage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18808777429 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81629996343 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523510971787 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5625230693 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.214285714 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252319725134 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904261625354 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721372592689 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148163916246 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485719723785 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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