In this world, everything has its own pros and cons and thus being a celebrity is no exception to it. Although, most of the people are attracted towards their life style thinking, it gives you things that a common man can not even imagine to have. However, I strongly believe that it is not completely true. So, I will show the other side of the coin in this essay which is not as flamboyant.
To embark upon, when a person becomes famous, he actually losses his privacy and that I think is the biggest drawback. Being a human, we all have certain issues which we do not want to disclose. However, being a public figure, celebrities fail to hide anything because media nowadays follows them everywhere. In fact, all their activities not only come in the eyes of common mass but also they are judged by them which is quite lamentable.
In addition, they do not have the privilege to enjoy certain things in life which a normal person can such as they are devoid of going to public places like gardens, beaches and restaurants without security which I am sure is irksome.
To recapitulate, I can mention assertively that though, celebrities do relish luxurious life style which a common man can only dream of. Conversely, one should not forget that success comes for a very heavy price. We tend to praise their external appearance but we forget to notice the pain that they have gone through and the difficulties they face in their life's daily. Hence, I firmly endorse my point of view that nothing in this world is perfect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: YOU_THING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'think' or 'thinks'?
Suggestion: think; thinks
...their life style thinking, it gives you things that a common man can not even imagine ...
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Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'imagine having'.
Suggestion: imagine having
...u things that a common man can not even imagine to have. However, I strongly believe that it is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, conversely, hence, however, if, so, thus, i think, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65313653137 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49615109282 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60147601476 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8955395051 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115157326097 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383019136177 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407672835834 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695489866743 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351447048328 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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