The given chart illustrates the proportion of young and old people in Europe, who exercised occasionally at the gym during the 20-year period, from 1990 to 2010.
In 1990, the ratio of men and women in the age group of 25-34 going to the gym was around 9%, claiming the first place of all age groups. Over the 20-year period, the figure rose significantly by 41% to peak at 50%. Coming in close second in 1990 at below 9%, the percentage of young people, aging 18-24, climbed up steadily in the first 8 years, meeting the ratio of 25-34 group at around 29% in 1998. From then on, it continued to surpass the other 3 groups dramatically to reach the record high of 59% in 2010, despite a plunk to 50% in 2008.
While both starting at around 5% in the beginning, the 35-44 group's rate increased at a faster pace than 45 and over group to reach the number of 40% in 2010, higher by 19% compared to the rate of 45 and over group.
Overall, the percentage of people from all age groups going to the gym experienced a growth throughout the 20-year surveyed period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42131979695 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39013536086 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543147208122 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.646309168 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.428571429 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203942048838 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991120286974 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597883958407 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134558576516 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389608444929 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.9 61.2550243902 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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