You bought a music concert ticket. However you are unable to go. So you offer the ticket to your friend.
- explain detailed the concert.
- why you are unable to go
- how can your friend receive the ticket.
I hope you're well. I'm just writing to offer you a concert ticket that I won't be able to use.
Do you remember that I told you I was going to a gig this Saturday? There's an up-and-coming singer and guitarist who's playing at the Apollo Theatre; I think you'll be blown a way by how good he is. The concert starts at 7pm, but there's a support act on first, so you can arrive a bit later if you only want to catch the main performance.
The reason why I'm offering you my ticket is that I've been asked to visit a client in Germany to help with a product launch, and I won't be back until Monday.
If you're free on Saturday evening and you'd like to go, just speak to my brother. He'll be going to the gig, so you won't be alone, and you can arrange to meet beforehand or outside the venue on the night.
I hope you can make it, and that you enjoy the concert!
See you soon
Nick
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...d like to go, just speak to my brother. Hell be going to the gig, so you wont be alo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.04545454545 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14336377325 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619318181818 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9552601424 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1111111111 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429095491291 0.216113520407 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177103860292 0.0766984524023 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919899069444 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244392514739 0.12726935374 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532218403681 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 70.7449484536 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.21 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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