In modern world, education of children is taken extremely somberly as it is considered to be vital for the robust foundation of a child's bright future. Thus, most of the population believes that children must start attending school at an early age. Though, some people do not agree with this notion, however, I totally support this concept for the following reasons.
Firstly, it is beneficial for both the parents and the children due to the harsh fact that nowadays, in most of the families, both the parents are working. Therefore, they do not have enough time to take care of their child. Conversely, in schools teachers are bound to pay attention towards them and hence they receive good care. Even, I send my four-year-old son to nursery so that he learns the basic things and it allows me to focus on my work as well, so, it is a win-win situation.
Additionally, at home children do not learn much in comparison to these facilities. It is because parents do not have time and skill required to teach them new things necessary for their timely development but teachers are trained to do so. Also, it is feasible to inculcate certain habits in them at this age, such as, sharing, co-operation, and socializing with other kids which is essential to live in a society and all these qualities are easy to develop in school. I can reminisce, my teacher always told me to share chocolates with my friends and that is how I learned sharing, it helped me a lot in future to make a slew of friends.
To sum up, I can say assertively that the advantages of sending young children to school far outweigh any negative repercussions. Although, initially it might be difficult for them to adjust but gradually they will not only assimilate this change but indeed begin to enjoy it as they make many new friends there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 576, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to share'.
Suggestion: to share
...th my friends and that is how I learned sharing, it helped me a lot in future to make a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70532915361 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69725125928 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592476489028 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4290566955 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.461538462 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230297147269 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771282013965 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437362767243 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134530965773 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384819126784 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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