There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?Please provide solution.
Music is food for the soul, mind and body. People listen to the music according to their mood to relax and enjoy their time. It could be international songs or folk music. However, these days people’s preferred choice is the international music due to its global appeal. This essay will explain why the traditional folk music is important for the society and how it helps the society.
Firstly, traditional music is an integral part of a culture of the country. The vibrations and tones describe the traditions of the society. For example, the Indian classical music defines the Indian culture and behavior through its variety of tones. There is a music for every state of the mind such as if you are happy, sad or in a family function. Therefore, traditional music weighs more than international music.
On the other hand, the international music is prepared with a global appeal by multinational music corporations. It has a cool, jazzy and vibrant approach to attract the global population. For example, Shakira’s waka waka song was played in the opening ceremony of Soccer World Cup. However, it did not last long in people’s heart due to lack of substance. The substance comes when people are able to connect themselves to music. Therefore, the international music lives for a smaller time in peoples’ memories.
This essay explained that the traditional music connects with culture and traditions of the people which the international music is failed to do that, owing to its global nature. In my opinion, the traditional music is indispensable due to its close association to society and culture in the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10780669145 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99464934689 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527881040892 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1629832005 50.4703680194 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9444444444 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 2.91625615764 343% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396192139602 0.242375264174 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150697872237 0.0925447433944 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109838865739 0.071462118173 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276250258819 0.151781067708 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486854457633 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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