Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country.
What are the reason? Solution to change negative attitude?
Visiting of over-sea tourists is considered that will cause of negative consequences for a country by local residents. Bad behaviours of foreign visitors are some of main reasons and should be improved by involving of tourist agencies and government.
Many indigenous people have negative attitudes with international visitors due to unsuitable behaviours of tourists. It can be seen obviously that there are a lot of tourists do not respect regulations of attractive destinations. They damaged scenic spots and ancient structures by painting on surface of walls, making scratches on trees or polluting beaches with litter and trash. Apart from this, foreign visitors with bad behaviours let social evils in local communities be more serious. For example, prostitution often occurs more in zones which have many tourists rather than the other ones. These have a negative influence on not only nature and social environment but also obeying laws of local residents.
Because tourism is a great opportunity for economic development, the dark side of it should be limited by effective solutions of tourist agencies and government. For tourist agencies, visitors need to be informed meticulously about local regulations and laws of their hosts, and urged to have a respect these. For government, good policies to manage the developing of tourism industry are required so that the expansion suites the situation of the country. To give a clear example, the government of Bhutan has limited the number of foreign tourists a year to ensure good provided services and harmonious developing.
To conclude, only when international tourists show their great behaviours and respect for their hosts with involving of bodies relatively, the opposition of local resident to global tourism will be changed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent. For tourist agencies, visitors need to be informed meticulously about local ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45161290323 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95207803296 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566308243728 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7753029798 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202705140625 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070397651486 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588830413158 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12263943441 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125142257727 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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