You have a pen friend living in another country and he she is curious to learn about the major news items in your country Write a letter to your pen friend In your letter Greet your friend and say why you are writing Briefly describe a news story i

Dear James,

This letter finds you in good health. I am intending to write this letter to give you the insight and highlights of the recent news story in my country which is gaining popularity at a very rapid rate.

Few days back, one of the most famous saints named Sandeer was arrested by the Police of Vihar state as he was caught red handed doing some ill-legal activity. Although, police was suspicious about his activities since long and thus they were trying to gather some robust evidences against him, so, that they can make a strong case and present him in the court of law. As a result of the diligence of the Police department, he was sentenced to twenty years of imprisonment by the High court.

Nowadays, people are following this case extremely intensely because this criminal was considered to be a very noble and great social worker. Thousands of people used to follow him blindly. Even at the time of his arrest, hundreds of people came on road and revolted against the Court's decision because they used to treat him like god and were not able to believe such news. However, in the last, justice was done and people also realized that he was a fraud and was fatal for the society.

Take care. I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes,
James

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Average: 9.6 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear James, This letter finds you in good health. I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, thus, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62995594714 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28816356991 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651982378855 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4899219598 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5454545455 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.079996126671 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313106319492 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411133948702 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624364076877 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562508458236 0.0580467560999 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.