"The following advice was given to a politician by his political consultant:
It is true that 200 apartment renters protested in the rain about the elimination of rent control regulation. However, there are 20,000 renters in the entire city. 19,800 of them stayed home and did not protest. The group that did not protest is much larger and better represents the opinion of renters throughout the city: that the elimination of rent control is not a problem. You should not let the small protest discourage you."
Describe how well the reasoning is in this. In the discussion be sure to analyze the line of reasoning and the use of evidence in the argument. For example, you may need to consider what questionable assumptions underlie the thinking and what alternative explanations or counter examples might weaken the arguments's conclusion. You may also address possible changes in the argument that would make it more logically sound and would help you to better evaluate its conclusion.
200 apartment renters protested to bring elimination of rent control. However, there are 20,000 renters in the entire city, deriving that 19,800 stayed home and choose not to protest. Nevertheless, assuming that the group which did not protest better represents the opinion of renters throughout the city is fallacious. The given argument is rife with loopholes and assumptions.
Firstly, we can't assume the group which didn't protested doesn't believe in elimination of rent control regulation. Maybe they wanted to protest but couldn't come out of home as it was raining. Maybe they were busy on that following day and that's why didn't come out of home to protest. It can be possible only those 200 renters had idea regarding the protest. Until, we can't validate the reasons for not protesting, we can't assume the group was against the protest.
Moreover, this protest can galvanize the movement. After seeing 200 renters coming out to protest in rain, maybe more renters will be encouraged to support this protest. The first protest can act as a catalyst to the movement. Seeing their relatives or neighbours supporting the protest, this act can play a domino effect. Next protest can see a significant increase in renters protesting against elimination of rent control regulation. If the argument provided any evidence to show that no new protest will happen, then it would be more cogent to assume those 19,800 renters didn't have any problem in elimination of rent control regulation.
Also, there are few more assumptions which need to be addressed. The group that did not protest is larger but we can't assume it better represents the opinion of renters throughout the city is totally illogical. Even though, only 200 renters protested against the elimination of rent control regulation, these 200 renters protest should not be ignored. A politician has a duty to solve problem of it's people. These 200 renters may have a very hard time living in a rented enclave if rents for home increase exponentially. They may be forced to leave their rented house and start living in a cheaper house.
Even though, only 200 apartment renters protested and 19,800 renters sat at home, but we can't assume those 19,800 were in support of elimination of rent control regulation. We can't assume the larger group better represents the opinions of renters in the city.
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Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- not exactly. Need to know whether or not any other protesting activity has been taking place, such as petitions, written pamphlets, or media activity. How many times the protest has been taken place.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 395 350
No. of Characters: 1935 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.458 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.899 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.554 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 154 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.174 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.424 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.609 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.349 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.522 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.146 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing that the group which did not protest better represents the opinion of renters...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...opholes and assumptions. Firstly, we cant assume the group which didnt protested ...
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...Firstly, we cant assume the group which didnt protested doesnt believe in elimination...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... assume the group which didnt protested doesnt believe in elimination of rent control ...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ation. Maybe they wanted to protest but couldnt come out of home as it was raining. May...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...hey were busy on that following day and thats why didnt come out of home to protest. ...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...usy on that following day and thats why didnt come out of home to protest. It can be ...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...d idea regarding the protest. Until, we cant validate the reasons for not protesting...
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Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...date the reasons for not protesting, we cant assume the group was against the protes...
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Line 5, column 577, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...e cogent to assume those 19,800 renters didnt have any problem in elimination of rent...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...p that did not protest is larger but we cant assume it better represents the opinion...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...protest is larger but we cant assume it better represents the opinion of renters throu...
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Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... and 19,800 renters sat at home, but we cant assume those 19,800 were in support of ...
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Line 9, column 177, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...mination of rent control regulation. We cant assume the larger group better represen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 2260.96107784 87% => OK
No of words: 390.0 441.139720559 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0641025641 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64613521162 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435897435897 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.96107784431 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5989999577 57.8364921388 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8695652174 119.503703932 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9565217391 23.324526521 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82608695652 5.70786347227 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.25449101796 266% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 6.88822355289 218% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371005866425 0.218282227539 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12615265584 0.0743258471296 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106339714503 0.0701772020484 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253469415213 0.128457276422 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744371627915 0.0628817314937 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.3799401198 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.3550499002 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.197005988 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.32208582834 87% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 98.500998004 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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