11/10/2017
You are going on a short holiday soon and would like to invite a friend to join you. Write a letter to him/her and say
– Explain why you need a holiday.
– Explain why you want your friend to come.
– Where and when do you want to go?
Dear John,
As you know, I have been going through a difficult divorce with my spouse for almost a year and it has had an adverse influence on my mood and even overall physical well-being. So, traveling abroad appears to be a right thing to do to switch my attention from problems to positive prospects. In addition, I have an idea to start a new business with a Chinese firm and visiting the state provides me with an indispensable opportunity to meet face-to-face with my partners.
I would like you join me because of your knowledge of Chinese language. Although it is possible to find a good translator in China, I cannot trust blindly to a person whom I don’t know well. Moreover, you have not had a holiday for almost five years by now and having some rest and fun overseas will surely have an advantageous impact on you. I promise the majority of our time would be devoted to a variety of local entertainment.
I plan to arrive at Beijing airport on 2nd March 2017. It will be a Friday evening; so, there will be a plethora of time to acclimatize and adapt to a novel time zone as well as overcome a jet lag. I intend to spend four days in the megalopolis and three days on visiting such places as the Great Wall of China that are situated outside the city. I will not go into details because I assume you are well-aware of the local landmarks and attractions.
Hope you’ll accept my invitation.
Sincerely yours,
Eugene Dubinchuk.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 264 250
No. of Characters: 1150 1200
No. of Different Words: 164 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.031 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.356 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.645 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 75 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.849 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.294 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.613 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.087 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, in addition, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 262.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60305343511 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77218025976 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625954198473 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9970413308 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7692307692 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147808245429 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548566633173 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686287149471 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995888941535 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516756410991 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.