You are going on a short holiday soon and would like to invite a friend to join you. Write a letter to him/her and say
– Explain why you need a holiday.
– Explain why you want your friend to come.
– Where and when do you want to go?
Dear Mike,
How have you been?. it has been a long time since we last met. I am writing this letter to tell you that I am planning an adventurous trip to Samoa island and would like you to join me.
Lately, I have not been able to keep up a healthy work-life balance due to hectic work schedule. To elucidate I have been involved in some alluring projects which gave me sleepless nights. I know you love travelling and perhaps if I have your company on this trip then I wouldn’t get bored on this trip. additionally, I believe this is an ideal opportunity to get away from your monotonous schedule and explore one of the famous travel destinations.
I am planning for a short trip to Samoa, it is one of the secluded islands in the Pacific ocean which attracts tourist globally. From the mesmerising white sand beaches, you can see the panoramic view of the vast blue ocean. Additionally, we can explore nearby islands and try adventure sports like sky-diving, snorkelling and kayaking. I plan to travel next week on Thursday.
As I need to plan an itinerary so I shall await your response.
Warm wishes
Brian
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, How have you been?. it has been a long t...
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Line 2, column 21, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
Dear Mike, How have you been?. it has been a long time since we last met....
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Line 4, column 310, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Additionally
...I wouldn't get bored on this trip. additionally, I believe this is an ideal opportunity...
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Line 9, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inerary so I shall await your response. Warm wishes Brian
^^^
Line 10, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hall await your response. Warm wishes Brian
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73267268439 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7731734394 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8461538462 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158413705641 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526623697941 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737897501738 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103690646634 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847458107339 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.