You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter,
Describe the item
Explain where and when you left it
Say what action you would like the company to take.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inquire about a travel bag which I lost in transit from Delhi to Mumbai on a train. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate the bag was turquoise green is colour with steel handles and had my name engraved on it. The bag was of sentimental value to me as it was covered with travel stickers which rejuvenated memories of exciting trips to some of the alluring destinations globally. Although when I boarded the train from Delhi junction the bag was kept in the overhead storage box however when I arrived in Mumbai I found the bag missing. For your information, I was seated in A3 compartment seat no 42 lower berth and this information was provided to your staff at Mumbai railway station.
Lastly, I would request you to kindly look into this matter as the bag contains official documents which I have to submit to my office failing which my office management can take legal action me. Hence I look forward to your cooperation and providing an immediate resolution.
Yours sincerely
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to inquire about a travel b...
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Line 4, column 229, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...juvenated memories of exciting trips to some of the alluring destinations globally. Althoug...
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Line 6, column 197, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ce management can take legal action me. Hence I look forward to your cooperation and ...
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Line 8, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...diate resolution. Yours sincerely Said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, lastly, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 180.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71666666667 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64581547092 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2894014465 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13135542952 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047983438456 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352706564101 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858364782629 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347117479806 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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