Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to you with regards to intending to buy a product of your company for the important usage by our well known company ( DESS enterprises).
I am one of their employees, working as an incharge of the Purchasing department. We are in desperate need of External hard drives which should be of two TB at least. Additionally, they must have the auto back-up feature along with the robustness.
Our company require these gadgets to store the extremely crucial and vast data which includes some of the very significant and confidential information. Therefore, I need you to give me the guarantee that you will be able to recover all the data from these equipments, if they get crash due to some accident. We would like to place the order of minimum fifty of these as soon as you satiate all our needs. Payment will be made in advance through cheque.
Waiting for your prompt reply.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81595092025 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67011457378 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687116564417 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0828313896 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189582202668 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607795249076 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695297376309 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114731069179 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893409358151 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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