Dear James,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I must tell you that I am very glad to read your letter stating your intense desire to have a better command on English language. I am aware of the fact that you have never been to a language school prior to this however, I would be honoured to suggest you an ideal one for your bright future. Since, we all know the significance of this language, it is indeed mandatory to opt the best school.
To begin with, an appropriate institution should be able to comprehend the requirements of each student and focus on them accordingly and I can think of only one such institute i.e. "British Council" which is quite popular among the youth because of slews of reasons. For instance they have around fifty extremely skilled teachers who have been trained to not only understand the weak points of each individual but in fact to help them in an appropriate manner. Also, each class has only fifteen learners at a time which allows a tutor to pay equal attention to everyone.
Lastly, you will need to attend classes only four hours per week which will be feasible for you as it will not hinder your job as well. I myself went to this great institute to improve my English hence, I can recommend it to you confidently.
I hope my guidance will help you in making a right decision.
All the best,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e a better command on English language. I am aware of the fact that you have neve...
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Line 5, column 447, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate manner" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ach individual but in fact to help them in an appropriate manner. Also, each class has only fifteen lear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, however, if, lastly, so, well, for instance, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57894736842 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55761520401 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611336032389 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6384408283 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.818181818 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 4.34317383033 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199130133918 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668704133398 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650916949659 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096405279202 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08523132931 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.