People today move to new cities or new countries more than ever before. What changes do they experience? What strategies are there to meet these challenges?
Nowadays, many people like to stay in beautiful place. There are many causes why citizen want to move. One of them is that people are bored. They really want to change cities or countries. Citizens have experiences and strategies deal these challenges.
First, citizens could find new friends and neighbor when they move to cities. People might learn about culture in the new place because it is very essential to could survive. Citizens also might create communication to community then they could interact well with society in new town.
Second, people could acquire different culture when they move to another country. Sometimes they obtain shock culture because of different weather, language, and food. Several people only learn and understand if they want to survive. They also learn about cross culture understanding.
Third, several citizen could relax in new places because probably they move because the place before is not good for health. If people cannot move, they would be stressful. When people move, they find many tourism places that they could enjoy and comfortable to life. Citizen should manage time because people sometimes forget to do another activity when they are happy because it could produce citizen lazy to work.
In conclusion, several people change to new cities and new countries to try in different ambiance. People should survive if they acquire some problems from experience.
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