Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of the public heath, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays smoking and its impact on social health is one of the most controversial issues among the authorities of different nations all over the globe. People have different views about prohobition of smoking and usage of tobacco products, I believe cigarettes and other tobacco products should be banned due to improving the public health and diminishing the crime in society.
There are various reasons why I would argue that smoking should be forbidden in countries. Firstly, it is a serious dangerous for children's health and senior citizens of the society who breath the second hand smoke especially in public places such as trains, restaurants and cinemas. Secondly, the number of diseases which are related to smoking is on the increase and providing the health service for the public is a huge burden on governments' shoulder. They can spend this large amount of money on projects to find cure for debilitating diseases such as cancers. Finally, individuals spend a large amount of money on buying cigarettes that is a waste of money and is a threat to family's budget. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that in 2011 almost 2 billion dollars spent on tobacco products in London.
On the other hand, tobocco marketing can expand the number of crimes in the society by influencing the young individuals who are impresses by peer preasure. consequently, It would increase the juvenile delinquency which will lead to more severe crimes in the society and a particularly salient example of this is drug dealing. GOvernment authorities can regulate and control this issue by change the tax policy on tobacco products.
In conclusion, I believe that by restricting the tobacco trade in various countries governments can reduce the pollution, crimes
and violence among people.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17333333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80337891362 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556666666667 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.9928671803 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171387371921 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600189832064 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588891883621 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814025065727 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581313916295 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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