You are a student in a college and have not yet completed an important assignment for your course. You are writing a letter to your tutor
Apologize for the delay
Explain why it is late
Request an extension
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to ask for an extension for my assignment in computer data mining course.
My name is Rahi Honarvar and I am your student in Cambridge University. I am extremely sorry for not meeting the deadline that you set and realize that the delay may lead to a lot of inconvenience.
Unfortunately, I have faced a serious problem since 2 weeks ago. My mother had a stroke and consequently I had to came back home to take care of her. She had an operation and needed someone on her side to be with her. As a result, it will be unlikely for me to complete my assignment on 21th of june.
I would be extremely grateful if you could give me some more time to finish my assignment. I will come back to London in next 5 days and need 3 more days to revise my project. So if you agree with the extension, I will finish my work and hand it in on 4th of july.
Please let me know if you agree with the extension, and sorry again for any inconvenience it may have caused.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
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|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-02-09 | maligi_anil@rediffmail.com | 73 | view |
| 2020-02-09 | maligi_anil@rediffmail.com | 73 | view |
- Some people think that genetically modified crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes? 40
- Someone in your company is organizing a trip abroad for language learning training Write a letter to him her and say why he she should choose you for this trip as there is limited number of places available Describe who you are Why do you think this trip 53
- You have a problem with the computer at the office which has affected your work Write a letter to your manager and say What problem do you have What difficulties does this create for you What could be done about it 68
- It is expected that in the future old people are going to outnumber young people in many countries Do you feel this is a positive or negative development 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to ask for an extension for...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31632653061 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64767899898 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1341198233 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.5 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249671594253 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857772914042 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710190150745 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147036398078 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884176597394 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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