You are a student in a college and have not yet completed an important assignment for your course You are writing a letter to your tutorApologize for the delayExplain why it is lateRequest an extension

Dear sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to delay in submitting my maths assignment given during the summer vacation. I feel very sorry that I am unable to finish ontime, I have completed all other assignments and was expecting to complete the maths last week but this was not the case as I became sick.

I got fever and was admitted to hospital whole last week and unable to do any work. The doctor has suggested not to stress and take rest as the symptoms of the fever were due to high stress. Hence I had no choice but follow his advice, due to which I was not able to finish the assignment you gave us during the holidays.

Considering the above reason, I urge you to extend the deadline for my assignment submission by a week's time. I hope you would understand my situation and do the needful. I have attached a copy of my medical records which would provide the detailed information of my hospitailisation.

Thanking youn in Advance.

Yours sincerely,
Anil Reddy M

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssignments and was expecting to complete the maths last week but this was not the...
^^
Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess and take rest as the symptoms of the fever were due to high stress. Hence I h...
^^
Line 4, column 193, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... of the fever were due to high stress. Hence I had no choice but follow his advice, ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58426966292 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67778999789 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623595505618 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4021551224 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154599256849 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553663431011 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460594818683 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641730305841 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463901634593 0.0580467560999 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssignments and was expecting to complete the maths last week but this was not the...
^^
Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess and take rest as the symptoms of the fever were due to high stress. Hence I h...
^^
Line 4, column 193, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... of the fever were due to high stress. Hence I had no choice but follow his advice, ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58426966292 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67778999789 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623595505618 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4021551224 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154599256849 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553663431011 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460594818683 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641730305841 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463901634593 0.0580467560999 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.