You recently went to Australia for a holiday. However, your return flight was delayed by a day.
Write a letter to the airline company. In your letter:
Introduce yourself
Complain about the delay
Explain the problems that it caused you
Ask for a letter of apology and / or some form of compensation
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to complain about the bad service I recieved from your airline on 26th of november.
My name is Rahi Honarvar and I am one of your customers who travels a lot as part of my job and it is vital for me
not to miss my flights or not to encounter any delay which will change my schedule.
Last month I traveled to Australia, Melbourne for a 2-weeks holiday and I bought my flight tickets from your airline.
Unfortunately, my return flight was delayed by a day and it caused me and my family a lot of inconveniences.
First of all, we were bewildered at the airport for more than 7 hours till the airline staff provide us the hotel. Secondly,
I missed a very important meeting at work which was held in London and consequently I missed my flight to London On 27th of
November. Finally, My little daughter missed her birthday party at kindergarden which meant a lot to her.
I believe that I am entitled to ask for compensation. I would ask your airline to pay the expenses of my return flight to and
from London. Furthermore, as it is stated in my ticket you should pay back half the price of my ticket.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours sicerely,
Rahi Honarvar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...as part of my job and it is vital for me not to miss my flights or not to encount...
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Suggestion:
...ne staff provide us the hotel. Secondly, I missed a very important meeting at wor...
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Suggestion:
... I missed my flight to London On 27th of November. Finally, My little daughter mi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the expenses of my return flight to and from London. Furthermore, as it is state...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, furthermore, look, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4652173913 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70450509818 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569565217391 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7599078837 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5833333333 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.29896907216 256% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228011510002 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939417870609 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548420627265 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946831445419 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655611325108 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.