You recently went to Australia for a holiday. However, your return flight was delayed by a day.
Write a letter to the airline company. In your letter:
Introduce yourself
Complain about the delay
Explain the problems that it caused you
Ask for a letter of apology and / or some form of compensation
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about the delay of my flight.
my name is jack james. I live in England. I came to Australia to spend my holidays. it was one week holiday.
my return flight date was 2nd october. On the day of my return the flight has delayed to the next day. I have a hotel booking till 2nd of october morning at 8:00 am . I had to spend my day on the airport because i already check out from my hotel and it cause me very inconvenience.
I had an urgent meeting in my company on 3rd october and my nephews birthday party was at night on the same day. because of the delay I have a great loss in my business and I also miss my nephews birthday party which was held on that day.
I brought an expensive ticket for my holidays and due to the delay I face many problems both at the airport and after reaching to my homeland. I demand an apology from the airline and I also want the compensation from them.
I will be waiting for you reply. Contact me as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
jack james
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: My
...ain about the delay of my flight. my name is jack james. I live in England. ...
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Suggestion: It
...came to Australia to spend my holidays. it was one week holiday. my return f...
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Suggestion: My
...olidays. it was one week holiday. my return flight date was 2nd october. On ...
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Suggestion: .
...g till 2nd of october morning at 8:00 am . I had to spend my day on the airport be...
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
... already check out from my hotel and it cause me very inconvenience. I had an ur...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd it cause me very inconvenience. I had an urgent meeting in my company on ...
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Suggestion: Because
...day party was at night on the same day. because of the delay I have a great loss in my ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o want the compensation from them. I will be waiting for you reply. Contact ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27722772277 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35464888575 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559405940594 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.535931047 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.0 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.625 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 4.34317383033 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214758643986 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744956435393 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682101043406 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118357145531 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057137326114 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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