The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table compares top ten countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games by showing the number of medals won by these countries. Countries were ranked on the basis of the number of gold medals they obtained in the competition. The United Stated was able be the number one country in this Olympic game by winning 104 of total medals. The majority of medal they received were gold. China was ranked in the second place with 88 of total number of medals and 38 of gold medals.

Although Russia won more silver and bronze medals than Grate Brittan they were ranked in the fourth place as the UK was able ...

*** The full content of this essay is available to VIP readers

Votes
Average: 7.8 (35 votes)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2013-06-09 Madhuka 78 view
Essay Categories

Comments

flaws:
Number of Paragraphs: 2 4

better to have 4 paragraphs:

para 1: introduction
para 2: body 1
para 3: body 2
para 4: conclusion

sample:
http://www.testbig.com/ielts-essays/graph-below-gives-information-about…

or
para 1: introduction
para 2: conclusion
para 3: body 1
para 4: body 2

sample:
http://www.testbig.com/ielts-essays/graphs-below-show-types-music-album…

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 169 200
No. of Characters: 779 1000
No. of Different Words: 88 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.606 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.609 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.138 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 56 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 27 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 15 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.222 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.487 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.598 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.165 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 2 4