The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games.
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The table compares top ten countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games by showing the number of medals won by these countries. Countries were ranked on the basis of the number of gold medals they obtained in the competition. The United Stated was able be the number one country in this Olympic game by winning 104 of total medals. The majority of medal they received were gold. China was ranked in the second place with 88 of total number of medals and 38 of gold medals.
Although Russia won more silver and bronze medals than Grate Brittan they were ranked in the fourth place as the UK was able ...
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