Writing Task 2 (an essay)
Many people believe sport lessons are important in school timetable. Both boys and girls should take part in sports. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples from your own experience.
It is undeniable that sports are imperative for a child and if a young charger gets the opportunity to play at school schedule that will be hilarious. In my opinion, for proper health development and recreational activities, both boy and girl should have the opportunity to play in the form of a lesson but not in an excessive way. So, I agree with the given statement.
First of all, health is wealth. If a school child does not get the opportunity to play he will not be able to maintain sound health. For example, sports like cricket, football helps a boy or girl to know the techniques and at same time helps them to maintain disease free health. For this reason, sport lessons are important at a teaching institution and it cannot be avoided.
Secondly, pupils can become monotonous because of continuous classroom teaching. In this case, playing events can be a great option to break the monotony. It will function as leisure activity as well. For instance, education providers can schedule their classes in a way that a sporting class will be included in the time frame and that will be obviously an attraction for the young people of both sexes. Thus school time will be entertaining for them.
On the adverse side, spending too much time on sporting activities at school can be detrimental. To have a sound health and pressure free mind, it is not wise to forget other subjects such as English, Mathematics etc. Everything has to be done within the time frame by not being extreme in a particular area.
In conclusion, sport lessons have great impact on a young lad or lassie’s mind and school’s should consider it as a part of their curriculum to accommodate it within their time frame. Though there may be some downsides which cannot be denied, but benefits are much more than that. I think it is apparent from above discussion that sport classes in school schedule is necessary where both gender will participate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an excessive way" with adverb for "excessive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...to play in the form of a lesson but not in an excessive way. So, I agree with the given statement. ...
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Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ent. First of all, health is wealth. If a school child does not get the opportu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81492537313 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75996907076 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537313432836 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9651296912 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6111111111 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134503344084 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458942047355 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475563994986 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862384560567 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495153449194 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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