An ailing patient should have easy access to his/her doctor's record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
In our world, the doctors are seen as agents of God. Like the Supreme Being, the doctors also provide lives to human beings by curing them of deadly diseases and ailments, thus becoming our saviours. However, sometimes, some patients suffer because of ineptitude and incompetence of certain doctors. If a patient has an access to the medical record of all the doctors, he will be in a better position to judge whether he wants to go ahead with the treatment for the particular medical condition he is suffering from. In my opinion, the ailing patient should have access to the medical record of the d...
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Avg. Sentence Length: 27.762 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.731 7.5
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 583 350
No. of Characters: 2754 1500
No. of Different Words: 230 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.914 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.724 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.617 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 205 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 157 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 87 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.762 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.731 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.313 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.525 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.189 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5