TPO5
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do.
Some are inclined toward the opinion that we should do things that are enjoyable and create fun times for us, on the other extreme of the rope, some believe that there are many unpleasant things that are significant in blooming and thriving our life and we should do them. Although both sides take their own position, I think the latter group carries more weight. In the following paragraph, I will explain my reasons.
First, life is an analogous to a tortuous way in a mountain in many aspects so much so that there are many unenjoyable things that play the crucial and inevitable role in our life and without doing them our lives will be damaged in the future. For example, many people don't want to go to dentist or doctor, but they do this because they know their health is very important. Actually, these things are an essential part of our life and it's obligation for us to do them and no one can turn a blind eye to the significance of them.
Second, achieving the success and dreams will not be realized without tolerating and doing unenjoyable things persistently. For instance, there are somethings that necessary parts of our job's success and can change our future and help us achieve our valuable goals. If you ask the most famous persons all over the world such as Cristiano Ronaldo that what is the main reason for your success? He will immediately say that he spent too much time on doing things he doesn't like and should do. He will say 'No sweet without sweat'.
The final reason coming to my mind is that sometimes by doing something we don’t enjoy can lead to enjoyment and create a new opportunity for us. For instance, when I was in university, writing English passages was very hard and unenjoyable thing for me. However, I tried to read different books and write variety passages. After six months, I felt that I like to write more and more and writing English passages is not an unenjoyable thing. Now, I can earn much money by writing different English articles for some newspapers and magazines. Actually, not only could hate writing text not get me away from my dreams, but also created new job opportunity for me.
To put everything in a nutshell and broad lookover the main points and discussions reveal the fact that there are many unenjoyable things and we should do them because they are a vital part of our life. We should know that success and future sweet dreams will not achieve without tolerating and doing hard and unenjoyable things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...in the future. For example, many people dont want to go to dentist or doctor, but th...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... spent too much time on doing things he doesnt like and should do. He will say No swee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2052.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68493150685 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48393852276 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504566210046 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2849706907 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0526315789 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316607307245 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097103903817 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10284391883 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196939387427 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516072444966 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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