Internet is sophisticated technology which connect whole world and also we can access to other planets. Nowadays people rely on technology more then ever. Technology involves in our lives as our daily food. Some people believes that internet provides valuable information, while others says that its creates many problems. In my point of views, technology provides us more valuable information and benefits rather then problems. My propensity is for following reason.
To begin with, Internet provides us valuable informative material in short amount of time. We just need to type few worlds and we can access to any kind of information we needs. For instance for students it's more helpful when they prepared for their assignments and examination they don't need to go libraries to search the material they just sit in their room and can get all they needed for preparation. They save lot of time for other things using internet service also they can contact with other fellow students via online webs and also with the teachers to get help off time from universities and college. So Internet assist us to get the information in short amount of time.
Secondly, the internet is economical way of communication around the world. People using the internet around the world they using E-mail service which is cheap way of communication they can get instance feedback without any cost. Also we can take online classes from other countries to get more information. world is changing quickly every days research work is done by scientist which is only available on their websites. internet bears tons of materials on single subjects we can evaluate the best source of information by using more authentic websites we can eliminate the unimportant material easily.
In conclusion, although internet offers many valuable information in brief time. We save time for other things for daily life. Also its provides cheap ways of communication and access to other countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in brief, in conclusion, in short, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17554858934 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71875584357 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492163009404 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1564873144 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8947368421 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7894736842 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207917173187 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776662162286 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716978495067 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139071297645 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517688606216 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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