There are certain considerations regarding the importance of realistic goal is important or ambitious goal, some people believes that realistic goal is more valued than ambitious goal,others have opposites views. In my prospective, the ambitious goal is more significance than realistic one.My propensity is for following reasons.
The very first reason is ambitious goal enhance inspirations when someone committed himself he than focus on that topic because only way of success is your,s inspirations if you are not motivated from your heart no one can achieve the goal in life. only ambitious gale inspire and motivate to accomplished the task. for instance if you set a goal which is not ambitious you may not focus and you may become bore and finally you may give up the idea,while ambitious goal keep you in and you become successful,
secondly, ambitious goal are often more interested to perform ,for example,when we know some thing already we may bore easily, while when we see new thing our interest become more young we show deep desire to learn or get the thing ,in realistic goal we can,t learn new things or we learn the things we already knows while in ambitious goal we can challenged himself or others capabilities we may explore new things,for instance we see every day technology human being get benefited every moment its all because of ambitious studied because human face the unrealistic thing than take the risk of life.finally they successful.
to sum up, although realistic goal have some advantages but ambitious goal motivate us which is more significant to achieve the goal,also ambitious goal keep you interested in to reach the destination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11678832117 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83480570674 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521897810219 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.1344086022 223% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 251.14714589 48.9658058833 513% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 233.666666667 100.406767564 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.6666666667 20.6045352989 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.6666666667 5.45110844103 342% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269655011378 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169715421098 0.076458572812 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713714750286 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200847387229 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827591219473 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.5 11.7677419355 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 58.1214874552 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.1575268817 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.0537634409 199% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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