Dear Manger, I am writing to you express my gratification about the party that took place in your Hotel "Grand Villa" on last Sunday evening. It was a sheer celebration of the success of our new project which comprised of around fifty leading corporate entities and I am glad to mention that it was a pleasant experience due to various factors.
To begin with, food was very savoury and it was served at optimum temperature which is appreciable. Also, the attending staff was prompt and showed good etiquette's which was the utmost priority as most of the times even in very luxurious high rated Hotels, staff members are not well trained and polite which has an adverse impact on the customers.
Although, I am quite satisfied with most of the things but I firmly believe that by making a few amendments, the popularity and the reputation of your establishment will rise tremendously. For example, the lighting was dark which was inappropriate for such parties, replacing those dim bulbs with brighter ones will improve the whole milieu.
Looking forward to visit your Hotel soon.
Best wishes,
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: WHICH_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'which comprised' or 'which consisted of' or 'which was composed of'?
Suggestion: which comprised; which consisted of; which was composed of
...ation of the success of our new project which comprised of around fifty leading corporate entities...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to visiting'.
Suggestion: to visiting
...ve the whole milieu. Looking forward to visit your Hotel soon. Best wishes, James...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your Hotel soon. Best wishes, James
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04838709677 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76359252335 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698924731183 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2882897905 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.375 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157431422005 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736253464452 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827231290805 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110100791406 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608885345154 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.