In about 130 words, write a paragraph about the changes in our lives in the next 30 years. (people, foods and water, transportation, communications……)
What will the world look like in the next 30 years? I think in the next 30 years, our lives will change significantly. At first, because of the development of artificial intelligence, robots will work in the place of people. So, people do not have to do the hard work and to work in unsafe working conditions. Second, the energy industry will be transformed. It is possible for us to produce energy from carbon dioxide (CO2). Food and water are also combined from oxygen and sunlight. In terms of transportation, people can easily go to wherever they want with self-driving cars. In addition, we do not need to fuel for the reason that this car does not use fuel, so the environment will not be polluted. With communication, people are in a renew war, there are many devices created to help them to communicate and connect to others as supper smart phone, laptop, etc.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 738, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...uted. With communication, people are in a renew war, there are many devices created to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, so, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 1615.20841683 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 154.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62987012987 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78435167837 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8397761187 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140108949376 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593773169745 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899043962695 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140108949376 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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