Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People around the word are less happy or less satisfied with thier lives than people were in the past. while, It can be said that one of the most important causes of this phenomena is the technology of the modern life which ,it is one of the outcomes of the world revolution. Furethermore, these technologies have had some positive effects on the living standard of humanbeing. It is very important that this aspects have an important part of our analysis.
These technologies have made people more alone during thier daily lifes. And also, they make less comunication between humans. Although this facilities make it accessable which pepole can have communicate with each other along a long distance,but generally they are one of the crucial causes of unsatisfactory of people.
The new abilties which technologies bring to the humans have changed the way of thinking of them and their minds. For instance, poeple at new age have less needs to go with each other for hunt or protect pureposes which it could create some spacial relationship that it is not evaluate at new age.
The change of need of pepole has made them a new creature which they can not be saticfacted by simple things. they need a new instument and facilities etc. instantinously. this new vision is a two side suwer, at one aspect it caused a dynamic process which encourage situation along the technology. at the other hand, it is made a daily society which do not have any problematic about the humanity and ethics etc.
Conclusively, the negitive points of this process have been more than positive ones. so, as consecounces of this revolution have made people more nerves, alone, unethic, and some other negetive point on humanities. in my opinion, The best way for control this events is, increasing of education amoung the humans to remember thier main roots and humanity which it can be possible at the next step learning of useages of new technologies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90881458967 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74972692154 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2798133113 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9375 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136424081839 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054519195502 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987196681014 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831136516107 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628888289176 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.