it is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. to what extent do you agree or this agree with this opinion?
what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
The ability to detect right and wrong choice for children is important and they should be taught this at an early age. Punishment is argued to be one of the helpful sources for learning the distinction. I do not agree with punishing children. Investigating the contribution of stress and hate that it cause for kids shows this.
Children who are punished at school are in general the most stressed students. Doing the best and trying hard in their homework is not a means to be successful and it does not show that they have learnt something, for them it is just an end in order to not being punished by their parents or trainers. So, it is plausible to say punishment is not an incentive. On the contrary it is a source of stress.
The sense of encourage and enthusiasm is omitted by punishing a child. By the way of illustration, a children often hates a teacher for being strict and as a result will hate that lesson. The same applies to parents. Generally, children like their mothers rather than fathers because they are more kind and do not punish them. Therefore, it is acceptable to say that punishing distract the object of leading children.
In summary, using punishment as a way of teaching children has always been a matter of conflict and aggravation for parents and teachers. I think any physical or mental punishment which is a cause for stress to children should not be allowed in home and school because of its destructive effects which it has on children. Teaching children should not be at the expense of making misbehavioral to them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...ng a child. By the way of illustration, a children often hates a teacher for being strict ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, thus, i think, in general, in summary, as a result, by the way, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6897810219 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74289680278 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521897810219 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0992374568 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3125 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349922477279 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118831018564 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920652248207 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228434623824 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138323122849 0.056905535591 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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