Dear Sir/Madam,
Being a responsible citizen of this nation, I am writing to you to express my immense dissatisfaction regarding the proposal of expanding our local airport along with multiplying the number of flights. Allow me to elaborate the deplorable consequences of the implementation of this notion. Plus,I believe that I am the best person to bring them to your knowledge as my residence is also located in the same society i.e. "Green Valley" which is adjacent to the airport.
Firstly, it will inevitably add on to the noise pollution here as it is already extremely difficult for children to study in such a nerve-wrecking milieu, it will indeed worsen the current situation. Also, roads heading towards the airport are old and are quite narrow as well. However, this drastic change will definitely aggravate the number of conveyances resulting into overwhelming traffic and congestion on roads.
Considering all these factualities and their pernicious impact on day to day lives of lakhs of residents living in this area, I strongly discord this notion.In fact, I feel that the quality of life of so many people should not be compromised. Although, I am in favour of the development of this realm but it should certainly not be done at the cost of the requirements of a slew of human beings.
Looking forward for an expedite redressal of this issue from your end.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, regarding, so, well, i feel, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12017167382 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04884801545 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665236051502 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5238088715 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.3 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 4.34317383033 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134050823011 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510671745243 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526311902877 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664003933179 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542428911143 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.