High school teachers (teachers of students ages 14-18) spend most of class time lecturing (speaking) while the students listen and take notes. Other high school teachers spend most of class time on discussion and projects that students are highly involved

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...hods ,based on that students are trained ,they  have so much potential for  probin...
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... them situations to elevate this ability ,as far as im concerned teachers have to ...
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...ate most of the class time to discussing ,and it lead to have more creative studen...
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...of the class time to discussing ,and it lead to have more creative students ,whereas...
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...d it lead to have more creative students ,wherease other hold opposite oppinion , ...
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...s ,wherease other hold opposite oppinion , in the following paragraphs i pursue my...
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... oppinion , in the following paragraphs i pursue my point of view. First of all ...
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...i pursue my point of view. First of all , to challenge  an idea make it to be mor...
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...nt of view. First of all , to challenge  an idea make it to be more comprehensibl...
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...t to be more comprehensible for students ,on the other hand when students  are ask...
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...tudents ,on the other hand when students  are asked for a  subject they begin  to ...
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...ther hand when students  are asked for a  subject they begin  to analyzing  and co...
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...nts  are asked for a  subject they begin  to analyzing  and considering  advantage...
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...dvantages and disadvantages of that idea  consequently they master their courses a...
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...ntly they master their courses and their  visibility about every thing  will exten...
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...isibility about every thing  will extend ,  also this method  boost  the creativit...
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...thod  boost  the creativity of brain and  play an important role in their future s...
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... of a problem and make the best decesion . Second ,discussing an idea ,enhance ...
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...m and make the best decesion . Second ,discussing an idea ,enhance  their toler...
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...decesion . Second ,discussing an idea ,enhance  their tolerance  ,I mean when t...
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...ussing an idea ,enhance  their tolerance  ,I mean when they hear apposite comments...
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...ssing an idea ,enhance  their tolerance  ,I mean when they hear apposite comments,...
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...I mean when they hear apposite comments,  learn how to be patient and cooperate  w...
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...,  learn how to be patient and cooperate  with class instead of blindly defense of...
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...tead of blindly defense of their opinion ,that is the fisrt step of working in gro...
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...at is the fisrt step of working in group ,consequently in future  they will be mor...
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...tics will be more beneficial for country Wheather they  be a boss of company or a...
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...hey  be a boss of company or an employee ,they will consult with their co-worker f...
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...or system progress Last but not least,After graduating  from highschool  started st...
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...s Last but not least,After graduating  from highschool  started studying in uni...
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...hschool  started studying in university  , one of the most biggest problem that st...
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...ed studying in university  , one of the most biggest problem that students faced with as soo...
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...ed studying in university  , one of the most biggest problem that students faced with as soo...
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...blem that students faced with as soon as  they start studying at university Is no...
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... as  they start studying at university Is not knowing how apply their  knowledge , taking not...
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...s not knowing how apply their  knowledge , taking note to pass their  courses  is ...
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...r  knowledge , taking note to pass their  courses  is what they know from highscho...
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...dge , taking note to pass their  courses  is what they know from highschool they a...
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...ghschool they are  just  passive persons .who are not able to research and even gi...
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...en give a lecture or present subjects on  their own way .  They rely  on  just the...
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...re or present subjects on  their own way .  They rely  on  just their notes and ha...
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...jects on  their own way .  They rely  on  just their notes and have mostly not oth...
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... the weakness of educational system.   Finally ,It would be better  if teachers...
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...ness of educational system.   Finally ,It would be better  if teachers and gene...
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...system.   Finally ,It would be better  if teachers and generally whole of educa...
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...ly whole of educational system put their  traditional teaching methods away and ma...
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...nity for student to take a part in class ,that lead to a more dynamics society whe...
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...ople wont be just listener and satisfied  to what governers provide them .
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...atisfied  to what governers provide them .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, second, so, whereas, i mean, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19464720195 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82642011596 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605839416058 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 102.0 20.1344086022 507% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 258.129206988 48.9658058833 527% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 533.75 100.406767564 532% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 102.75 20.6045352989 499% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.25 5.45110844103 482% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 75.0 5.5376344086 1354% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143350467921 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104595148626 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604327862679 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070976349556 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619822931531 0.0645574589148 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 54.4 11.7677419355 462% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -32.05 58.1214874552 -55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 43.1 10.1575268817 424% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.01 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.0 8.01818996416 162% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 10.002688172 550% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.8 10.0537634409 426% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 10.247311828 537% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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