some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, bussiness and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely
Scientific research, business and academic world had been changing in the past decades. There some information had been discovered which gives a huge impact on development. Some people believe that it is very important to shared as much information, in other hands, some people believe that there is some information which classified and do not need to share. I believe that the information should not be shared freely.
The information in scientific research, business or the academic world is very important. This information perhaps for some people is a dangerous or if this information shared, will give a wrong speculate among people. I believe that this information should have spesific laws which can control in distribution. The government itself should select the information who will be shared carefully because give a society wrong information will give a huge catastrophe. For example, in my country, the government announced about new energy which can be used as a safer energy called nuclear. Whereas, this information becomes a pro and contra in society. The people who do not have a clear information about that become paranoid and get scared easily.
In other hands, I do believe gives as much information as possible also a great action to support and increase a quality of people's life.The easier people get the information becomes a factor to measure the quality of a nation. For example, Europe as a developed country which each people can get all information easily, the government provides the access of the information in every corner of the street, so people in the rural area also can search the information for developing their land. This sample does not happen in a developing country. People in a developing country always have a limited solution for their problem because of the access of the information.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that should be a law or a new regulation to control shared information about a scientific issue, business and the academic world. The information which shared should give not only a new information but also a safe feeling for everybody.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... and increase a quality of peoples life.The easier people get the information becom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14202898551 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90798464769 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431884057971 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3392743898 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.352941176 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17647058824 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415242926571 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156821183532 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119539316424 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304929287784 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129564713301 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.