Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Thanks to the innovation in healthcare services, humans’ life expectancy has been prolonged. However, I believe that retirement age advisedly remain intact rather than being extended due to the likelihood of aging-associated issues and graduate unemployment involved.
To begin with, there are undoubtedly a variety of age-related problems that should not be overlooked. It is undeniable that the older people are, the more likely they are able to struggle with serious physical ailments. Cardiovascular and Alzheimer’s disease, for instance, are not uncommon amongst elderly citizens. Addition...
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