Dear Sir/Madam,
This to bring your notice that I have ordered a JBL bluetooth speaker from your internet portal on 8th December.
It was supposed to be delivered the very next day. But, I have not received the speaker yet. The order number for the product is JBL-xx-xxxx-xxx.
The speaker was needed over the weekend for a family get together. I did not expected such delay from a reputed company like yours. I would like the delivery issue to be handled with utmost importance and urgency. Please see to it that the speaker is delivered to me latest by 12th December, otherwise I will cancel the order. Such delays at your end has shaken my confidence in your company and it's products.
I hope my concern will be handled in a professional manner. Looking forward to your reply and immediate perusal.
Your faithfully,
Harpreet Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'expect'
Suggestion: expect
...nd for a family get together. I did not expected such delay from a reputed company like ...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...importance and urgency. Please see to it that the speaker is delivered to me late...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'me the latest'.
Suggestion: me the latest
...to it that the speaker is delivered to me latest by 12th December, otherwise I will canc...
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Line 8, column 35, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a professional manner" with adverb for "professional"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s. I hope my concern will be handled in a professional manner. Looking forward to your reply and imme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 145.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86206896552 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68452206912 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662068965517 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.536339626 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.75 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0833333333 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 4.34317383033 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120799979837 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446148228466 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427384802171 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667498028151 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390385767278 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.02 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.