You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Maria,
How are you? Hope this will find you in good health. I apologize for the delay to give a reply to your letter, as I was busy with shifting to my new home. I am just writing to let you know about my new place of living.
Previously, I said you that my previous house was not only noisy but also insecure to reside. Since it was on the ground floor, there was much scope for the miscreants to do theft. Whenever I complained about these problems to the landlord, he hardly paid any attention to my problems. This kind of attitude compelled me to move from that place.
Now, my new home is very comfortable and secure. It is situated in a typical residential area, where the people are very concerned about making any crowd. The building is under the surveillance of the security camera, which is the main reason to rent it.
Finally, it will be a great if you come to visit my new house with your family on this coming weekend. I hope we can have fun and enjoy with each other’s company.
Take care and write back soon.
Toya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Take care and write back soon. Toya
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41836734694 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35822485989 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668367346939 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0021865035 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.8571428571 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186656860329 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564393314394 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585858362568 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893773583637 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814358684524 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.0946893788 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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