Nowadays people are suffering from work related problems, companies are giving more impotence to the work goals rather than the humane factor. Some people argue that, employees should work a fixed number of hours in a week and employers should not ask more than that. I completely agree with statement.
Firstly, recent studies revealed that, many of the employees are having stress related issues despite their age or gender. Cardio- vascular problems and depression are very common among workers, experts points out that extended working hours are the main reason behind this alarming situation. Furthermore, many of the young bloods in the work force are finding it difficult to keep a good balance between their professional and personal life. For instance, recent study by an NGO points out that divorce rate in young working couples are very increasingly because of the problems related to their work schedule.
Secondly, people need to rest some time. Long working hours definitely effect their performance and also their job satisfaction level. Moreover, some times this forced labour may result in person's ability to do other works apart from his routine job. In addition, when people spent most of their time at their work place they might lose their social capabilities and end up being a workaholic person. On top of that, these long hours creates frustration in employees and it may leads to conflict among colleagues even some times with employers too.
To recapitulate, the authorities should impose strict rules regarding the work practices especially matters related to the normal working hours. In such way they can ensure the well being of both company and work force. Many of the European countries have strict rules regarding this matter and in opinion all the other countries should follow such regulations to protect the workforce.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, even so, for instance, in addition, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23411371237 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49999944072 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612040133779 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4151964382 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327101340854 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106361971474 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105979280887 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212267221039 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14412566485 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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