Group #1: Analysis of Issue
The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations or reading.
I completely agree with the statement because, in my opinion, the desire of corporations to maximize profits does create conflict with the welfare of the nation at large. I understand huge profits augment the reputation of the corporation and, of course, a huge amount of money is required for efficient functioning of large corporations.But, many corporations' sole purpose is to maximize profits and adhere to maneuvers which create conflict with the welfare of the society and members. We often come across incidents were corporations compromise the health and well being of the workers(the lower rungs) in order to maximize profits. For example, not providing sufficient protection to workers to help minimize the
harmful effects of the hazardous environment they work in, like in the chemical factories or
cracker factories just because they do not want to invest money and want to maximize
profits. Consequently, this deteriorates the health (physical and mental) of the workers, and if
health is compromised their profits will definitely deteriorate.
Some corporations, in order to maximize profits, are willing to adhere to illegal or illicit maneuvers and thus this raises a question on the authenticity and integrity of the organization as well as their members'. I believe it is more important to focus on how you make money and not on how much you make! Such illicit maneuvers are responsible for
violating citizens' right to information, right to the knowledge of truth and thus compromises
the welfare of the society.
I believe, not all ways of maximizing profits create conflicts with the welfare of the nation, as the authentic ones do not violate any law, do not deprive the citizens of their basic need and amenities, but others which compromise or violate laws do create conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, of course, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 299.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21739130435 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97908654724 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518394648829 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6999571918 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 195.0 118.986275619 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.375 23.4991977007 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 5.21951772744 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307274749005 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134843469382 0.0831039109588 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150717211232 0.0758088955206 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861253613246 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120602847257 0.0667264976115 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 14.1392134831 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 48.8420337079 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 12.1743820225 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.