Air travel nowadays very cheaper as compared to the past. In olden days only the wealthy people and business man were able to afford this mode of transport. Introduction privatization in the airline industry changes the entire scenario, companies are competing with each other to dominate in the market. For that they are doing whatever they can to attract more passengers to their carrier, in form of reduced ticket prices and cheaper business class rates and so on. I firmly believe it is a positive movement.
Firstly, cheaper rates allows more people to utilize air transport for their daily needs. So that people can reach their destinations more easily and comfortably. For instance, for traveling a 500 kilometer distance, if we use road or rail transport its going to take almost 5 - 6 hours to reach the destination depending on the condition. whereas, if we use flights, we can reach the same point within 1 or 2 hours. Thats the kind of difference air travel makes in people's daily life. Furthermore, importers and exporters can utilise this cheaper rate to the easy movement of their goods and gain some profit out of it. also consumers will get imported items cheaply as a result of this cost reduction.
Secondly, tourism is the another which will be benefited from this scenario. For international tourists, air travel fare is their basic preference when they select a destination, because usually that will cost almost 20-25 percentage of their total tour cost. If a country has cheaper airline network that will definitely attract tourists and also foreign money to the host country. Like in India, currently there are number of aircraft companies are operating both in international and domestic sector. Majority of them budget flights offering tickets and other benefits in cheaper rate. As a result recent studied in Indian tourism industry revealed that many of the European travelers prefer India as there hot destination mainly because of this.
On the flip side of the coin, there are some negative effects also. Aviation fuel is one of the major air pollutant, so frequent flights due to the increasing popularity makes things even worse. Moreover, this unhealthy co petition over ticket pricing eventually effect aircraft companies in the long run and some times even results in closure of their services.
To recapitulate, cheaper air ticket rates are definitely a positive development in terms country's transportation facilities even though there are some negative effects also. But the advantages clearly outweighs the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2159.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20240963855 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75063765973 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587951807229 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7450510298 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8695652174 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0434782609 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17391304348 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127207073846 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359744906766 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345443513619 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078513069542 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225368572745 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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