A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.
- Describe your point of view
- Say what you like about the show and why.
- Ask the newspaper to take some action.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to express my deep disappointment with the article recently published in your magazine about the culinary program, Master Chef, which had been broadcasted few days ago. It is evident in the cover story that your journalist, Mr. Sam Conner had only considered the negative side of the program host, Mr. Gordon Ramsay.
Even though Ramsay sometimes shows his bad temper on the participants, I personally like him for his excellent culinary skills and being fair towards the contestants. Moreover, he always gives honest and constructive feedback to aspiring chefs. In addition to that, he has shared countless cooking suggestions with the viewers which I find very useful being chef by profession.
I would like you to issue a stern warning to your reporter not to write such meaningless and one-sided articles, and request your organisation to refrain from publishing such one-sided articles going forward.
I hope to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely
John Smithson.
- After leaving school or university, young people should choose a job or career that they love, rather than one that pays the best salary. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 84
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion 77
- Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 67
- Do you have to plan for the future Or stay focused on our present What is your opinion and why Provide examples to support your stand 81
- Do you think it is better for students to work before their university study? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35403726708 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8295589893 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.751552795031 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6799769717 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154157784869 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555758224205 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424605093212 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861630688326 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344859559229 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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